Valve Press System
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English speaker,please help me correct my paragraph.?
Then, I improved the existing sub-constant pressing power hydraulic system in several aspects. For instance, as the volume of hydraulic fluid flowing through the multiple valves unit of existing system was intensive, and therefore, the work effort of operating was great as well. In order to reduce the labor intensity, and enable to intellectualized control the Pile Driver, I replaced the manual reversing mechanism by a piloted one.
Your paragraph is understandable as it is, but your vocabulary is quite complex. Im a Junior at University and will attempt to help by attempting to make the paragraph easier to comprehend without changing to much so the paragraph will still fit well in the rest of your report. I am not sure about the word intellectualized.
Then, I improved the existing sub-constant pressing power hydraulic system. The volume of hydraulic fluid flowing through the multiple valve unit of the existing system was intense. This caused the work effort of the unit to be greater than desired. In order to reduce the labor intensity, and enable the intellectualized control of the Pile Driver, I replaced the manual reversing mechanism by a piloted one.
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